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Good mystery, great worldbuilding. Bravo :)

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Thank you for reading! :D

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Very Cryptic. I like the intel angle. I didn't see any obvious errors, and your style is excellent.

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Whoa. Crazy. Fast-paced. Mysterious. Loving it. Gave me Outland vibes. It's an old Sean Connery flick from the 80s.

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What a terrifying prospect! I'm glad I live in the world where the self-appointed thought police don't have that kind of power, and hope they never will. Keen to read the next installment!

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I understood right up until the end. Why did Prism kill Darrow?

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Hey there, thank you for reading till the end ;) My theory is this - a Blank sheet is never really a complete blank, and in Prism's case, he retained enough memory to react like the former intelligence officer he was - eliminate a threat.

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